[Argumentative Essay A+] 운동 넘 많이하면 좋아/아냐! 찬반에세이

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운동은 많이 할 수록 좋다/아니다에 대한 Argumentative Essay입니다.
미국현지에서 직접 작성하고 검토받았으며 A+을 받았습니다.

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Introduction
Argument & Reason 1
Argument & Reason 2
Conclusion

본문내용

운동을 오래할 수록 몸이 좋아질 것이라 생각 하지만, 어느 이상하면 오히려 독이다.

Introduction
There is a well-known perception regarding dieting and losing weight: If you live in the gym, practically working out hard every single day for extended hours, your body will look better. That is, the more you work out, the more weight you will lose. Based on that principle, some people work out 7 days a week, practically living in the gym. When somebody is being a "gym rat", many would think that he or she might be in great shape. I disagree with this idea. I believe that working out is not about the quantity.

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more than 3 hours in the gym after or before working. Because he was not a professional athlete, spending that much time and effort in the gym prevented him from being at home and being a father to his children. His daughter was crying on that TV show, saying that she misses her father being at home, playing with her. Later in the show, the father saw how much his family was sacrificing and promised not to spend too much time in the gym.

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